A few comments... not sure whether they'd make it better or worse, but I guess consider them...
* unpaid -> volunteer (probably sounds better)
* Seems to hesitate between "society" and "organisation", even within one sentence ("... organisations with small operating budgets ... bankrupt the society").
* 2000 items is rather a small database, and (if I'm placing it correctly) the consequences of fault or outage are minimal; perhaps emphasize it more as a learning opportunity taken rather than an achievement in itself?
* The text seems relatively long for what it's saying. Knowledge of basic SQL is buried at the end of a fourth paragraph where nobody will see it.
Finally, if there's a business analyst who knows you and knows you can do a job like this, I suspect the more effective way would be to directly get you one :-)
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* unpaid -> volunteer (probably sounds better)
* Seems to hesitate between "society" and "organisation", even within one sentence ("... organisations with small operating budgets ... bankrupt the society").
* 2000 items is rather a small database, and (if I'm placing it correctly) the consequences of fault or outage are minimal; perhaps emphasize it more as a learning opportunity taken rather than an achievement in itself?
* The text seems relatively long for what it's saying. Knowledge of basic SQL is buried at the end of a fourth paragraph where nobody will see it.
Finally, if there's a business analyst who knows you and knows you can do a job like this, I suspect the more effective way would be to directly get you one :-)
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